{"id":2287,"date":"2022-03-29T13:30:46","date_gmt":"2022-03-29T20:30:46","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/needlepictures.com\/tbd\/?p=2287"},"modified":"2022-04-04T22:10:24","modified_gmt":"2022-04-05T05:10:24","slug":"second-eyes","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/needlepictures.com\/tbd\/2022\/03\/29\/second-eyes\/","title":{"rendered":"Need Second Eyes for your Writing? 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I will also tell what works and when the writing sings!<\/p>\n<p> &#8211; Includes a comprehensive report on your overall work<\/p>\n<p> &#8211; All projects come with a complimentary shout out on my author&#8217;s <a href=\"https:\/\/twitter.com\/Crash_Shadow_\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Twitter page!<\/a> (More than 19K followers and growing every day!)<\/strong><\/p>\n<p> Rate: $1.00 (American) for every 1,000 words.<\/p>\n<p> 10K words = $10.<\/p>\n<p> 50K words = $50.<\/p>\n<p> And so on!<\/p>\n<p>Email me at <a href=\"mailto:secondeyes@needlepictures.com?subject=Beta Reading Services\">secondeyes@needlepictures.com<\/a> with your project description and details!<\/p>\n<p>The details:<\/p>\n<p> &#8211; <\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>I will go over every word, sentence, paragraph, and punctuation mark in your work<\/li>\n<li>General feedback on your work, to give you a better idea of how you want to edit and rework your project. <\/li>\n<li>I will point out where words, phrases, or sentences do not seem to be working as intended and may be confusing and offer suggestions<\/li>\n<li>Light editing is included. 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